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New guitar-only instrumental song:

https://soundcloud.com/apexparadigm/dream

The "A" sections are 4/4, with a progression of:
| : Cm---Ab---Gb---Eb-Db-Cm---Ab---F---G--Db : |, or
| : i VI bV III bII i VI iv v bII : | (as I like to think of it)
The "B" sections are a measure of 15/8 alternating with a measure of 7/4.
The guitars play either 5 3s or 3 5s for the 15, and then a groove in 7/4 in between.
The guitars trade off which is playing the 3s and 5s.
Harmonically, the compound time section is just a static Cm.

Written in a few moments, and then recorded in the course of half an hour as a sketch.
The title is somewhat arbitrary, but I do have my reasons.
Enjoy!

Questions and comments welcome.
Shiv K Feb 20
She was his sunshine
He was her moon,
He loved her so much,
And she loved him too,
And a time came,
When she refuses to rise,
And that day he lost,
His actual sunrise.


-Bii Shiv K
Love
Shiv K Feb 25
Hm, in the era of love,
In the era of attraction,
The poet himself is dedicated,
To that one girl,
Who always lived inside his heart.
Now really..............,
The poet himself is confused,
What love actually means,
He even applied science,
Newton's 3rd law of motion,
But don't know why,
He didn't get,
Equal and opposite reaction,
So he understood,
In love the science also fails,
Only the feelings,
And only the feeling won'zz.

-Bii Shiv K
Love
Shiv K May 11
Someone asked me…
How far will you go for love,
When I heard this,
A drop of Tear I felt,
Coming down from my eyes,
Sliding through my cheeks.
I started humming one song,
But my tears didn’t Stopped,
Only one picture appeared in my mind.
Why, I don’t know why,
Only her smile, her face, and her heart,
Was in my mind,
We were not in relation,
But still I always felt the connection.
~Bii Shiv K

— The End —