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Brie Pizzi Jan 2017
Thank you for pushing me over the edge.

Thank you for showing me your true colors.

Thank you for showing me how immature and petty you truly are.

Thank you for showing me you never really changed, regardless of how much you tried convincing me you did.


Never would I have thought I'd one day be thanking you for these things but here I am, saying thank you to the boy who broke me. I'm saying thank you for one reason and one reason only; with this, you have given me the ability to finally get over you.

Before, there was always a part of me that held onto you; that tried so hard to hold onto the good parts of you, with hope that maybe one day we could try again. But after that night, there is no going back. I no longer want to be with you. I no longer see my future with you. I now know that I deserve better than you, much better. And I will no loner fall for your lies and fake promises.

So thank you.
Àŧùl Jan 2017
I* have only been thinking every minute about her.

Lisping its way through her is our daughter,
Often she doubled as my dolly,
Very much I used to care for her,
Enjoy with me she did all the time.

Best of all she helped me move on,
Helped me realise my real worth,
Until time ends I shall love her,
Money-minded she was not,
If at all, she is real-minded,
Kingly she makes me feel,
A**s she herself is the queen.
Moving on constructively.
As she made me realize that there's a lot more to life than just love.
Leaving behind all delimiters.

My HP Poem #1378
©Atul Kaushal
I just hope God sees my smile as a Thank You because this smile it's a Thank You I say to God without even knowing I'm thanking him.
hazem al jaber Dec 2016
sweetheart .... thank you...




sweet lovely morning..
sweet wishes...
sweet love ,sweet feelings...
i get now..
got it this morning from you...
get it as always every day...

sweetheart ... thank you ....
used to get a sweet good mornings every day...
used to get your lovely loving messages every time...
and a best wishes...
but...
today is another day..
not like any day..
today ,i woke up so early and been waiting...
waiting the first mornings' ray...
and a first loving letter from you...
been waiting your wishes...
your wishes to me in this day..
because today ,its my birthday...

yes sweetheart...thank you
i received your warm wishes...
felt your whispers,enjoyed my ears...
heard your charming voice...
wishing me a happy birthday...
sweetheart ...
thank you ...

good morning my darling ...
lady with an amazing  lips ...
lips never taste like before ...
with a sweet lovely tongue ...
that wishing me always ...
and send me her love...
thank you sweetheart ...


good morning ...


hazem al ...
Silence Screamz Dec 2016
Will you come visit my grave
when I die?
I want to say thank you
and die again.
A little quip
June Dec 2016
Your eyes rose like the sun
And burned my innocence to ashes
aubrey sochacki Nov 2016
to the boy who treated me horribly:
as much as i dislike you, thank you.
you taught me that no one,
i mean no one should treat me the way
you did.

that no one should ignore me
that no one should forget my birthday
that no one should play me

that i should be treated with respect
that i should be loved for being me
that someone should think that everything about me is beautiful

so thank you for teaching me
that God has a better man for me,
a better man than you.
Àŧùl Oct 2016
I thank you a lot for being my lovely flame,
For helping me in continuing this game,
This game I refer to is played for life,
Not about playing with emotions,
You did not tell me any lie ever,
Neither did you confess back,
Nor did you reject mine...

I am happy because of your truthful things,
Being truthful you proved your strength,
Truthfully telling you my current state,
Just as you are in my dreams now,
Truly I'll see you filling the gap,
You did not deserve boycott,
Tested the waters I have...
HP Poem #1213
©Atul Kaushal
fresh-outside Oct 2016
If I can ask one question to the moon and the stars in the universe
"Who is wrong? Is it me? Or him?"
And if you say, "Yeah, you are wrong."

I just want to say that im not.
I'm not doing something wrong.

Am i asked you to make me feel over like friendship feels?
Am i asked you to make me feel that im the only girl who really wanted?
Am i asked you to take all of my minds over you?
Am i asked you to make me feel like theres a million billion electricity over mine?

No!
I do not ever wanted all!

But you did!

I dont know how to say sorry, so I said thank you.
my mind says that its just a poem, but my hearts not
Pinkbun17 Oct 2016
Ever since we parted ways,
My body didn't know how to feel,
my heart lost beats
Now I'm filled with chills and creeps


When I was alone and broken
You took my hand and I awoken
When the chains of torment wrapped around me-
you deserted me,
in fact-
You could only flee
You were a coward to all
But I pretended you would never let me fall

I should have known better
Three steps from life
I could only clutch to a knife
I bled, needing only you
Shinning nobility-that was you

The cancer of hatred, took hold
Once again I'm alone in this cold
My trust wasted, now dust
I don't think I can be relieved
There's no reason to ever have believed

Thanks to you,
Whenever I spot the rain
I'm reminded of all this pain
This dismantled being-
has no faith
Thank to you,
I've lost all there is to *gain
Written 2008, 12.9.11 and 1.14.15
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