#naive poems on Hello Poetry

Steve Strange Nov 2018

The kid springs out of the door
The demon gives the kid candy
The kid takes much more
The kid says "So what? It's just candy"

The kid springs out of the haunted house
The demon hands him a suit of a nun
The kid gets eager as a mouse
The kid says "So what? It's just for fun"

The demon screams at the kid
The kid begins to run
The kid fell and slid
The demon says "So what? It's just for fun!"

Wrote this in class in a period of 4 minutes

#naive

arian Nov 2018

me, a naive person.

Maybe you were right
That I was naive for thinking that
I could go days, weeks, months, years
Without your heavenly fingers
Dancing on the side of me I can't see.

i need you to always run your fingers on my body because i want to feel like i'm in heaven once.

#touch #naive #sad #emotional #arianricky22

V liv Nov 2018

H- 1

Where did I go wrong
Where did you go wrong
What did we do wrong
Holding onto the idea
We could be fine
We could fix this
Naive
That word was the beginning to the end
Hope
That was the falsity I never wanted

#love #manipulation #broken #relationship #end #fix #naive #false #hope #mend

Damaris Nov 2018

Never Fully Know

Not once.
Not twice.
But three times...

Gave my heart up three times

Every time was more cracked

Every time, fewer tears came out

Every time, I felt stupid

Was it love?
No.

All this was ... was a state of comfort after "knowing" them.

You never finish knowing a person, no matter how long...

#knowing #comfort #naive

Giannah Erin Ochoa Nov 2018

Night

This night's been cold,
this night's been warm
bringing me back to a memory
of a summer's parting.

So difficult as it left a trace.
The sun could have risen,
Everyday, I become someone different,
Someone else, 'til I never realized...

How I've lost "me".

Thanks for talking to me last night, but unfortunately
I'm sorry, too. I can't give you what you want.

#broken #memories #parting #breaking #unrequited #love #change #child #naive #maturity

Autumn Marie Nov 2018

I Gave You My All.

I gave you my all, and watched you choose better. I gave you my all, because you promised me forever.
     I gave you my all, while you went behind my back. Was it because she had what I lack?
      I gave you my all each time you wanted to leave, because I didn’t see I was being naive.
     I ranted and I quoted, “no he’s devoted”. Looking back, I feel I’m in the midst of a heart attack.
     I don’t know what to do, I’m simply lost without you.
     I gave you my all and ignored every warning, even when I knew; soon I’d be in mourning.
    Mourning the love you had for me, as I slowly watched it flea.
Do you know what this has done to my insides? It divides my head from my heart. And that’s only the start.
   I’ve given you my all, and you’ve made me feel so breathtakingly small.
   Please I beg of you; tell me, why wasn’t I enough?
Is it because I’m messed up? Or that my words come out a little rough?
    I’ve never experienced this amount of numbness pouring from my heart. It really is ripping me apart.

#naive #broken #foolish #discouraged #cheating

Yani Nov 2018

Cathexis

I poured you a cup of hot tea,
Paired with biscuits for you to see
How special you are to me;
How naive could you possibly be?

#crush #feelings #show #poem #naive #special #feel #people #time

Inkheart Nov 2018

Naïve

She flirted with death
Fearing no harm
But death fell in love
And she in his arms

#naive #death #sad #danger