Body:
“The thing is—you all can never compete with me.
I came to be when he no longer craved to be him.
I was forged as reminder, a warning:
That the fall would be brutal if he slipped even an inch.
But he stood tall, brimming with will and flame.
Now look at what you’ve all done to him.”
The body cries in agony.
The pain went away—
But the scars never did.
Mind:
“The boy was prepared, but green—
He pulled through, yes, but it cost him everything.
And now you boast of being unbroken?
It was I who inhaled the fumes,
Took in the blades of thought,
Endured the bruises that whispered ruin beneath the skin.
While you remained, stagnant and crude—
A venom sapping every ounce of his fortitude.
Like a Geist twined with Grue,
I was meant to imagine, to narrate, to survive and renew.
But your pride will drown us in this undertow.
You act like this is all a game?
No wonder they gave you the role they did.”
The mind counters, fire in its breath.
The mental quivers with angst.
The memories went away—
But the scars never did.
Spirit:
“Me? I was never told to share—only to care.
Maybe I came too late.
I always prayed for our fair,
But the universe doesn’t barter in balance.
It demands variation, disruption,
To witness, to scatter, to shimmer through us.
It hums a silence so vast it aches—
Searching for vessels to cradle its flair.
It has no morality, no mercy,
Only the echo of what it wills.
What we do is all it ever notices.
We are its muse,
Dancing to a symphony that stretches beyond the stars.”
The Spirit spoke, and silence fell.
The body and mind, though bruised and bitter,
Rekindled their uneasy affair.
But the Spirit wept—not out of pain,
But for the truth laid bare.
It was a dilemma no one could deny.
The tune was silent—
Yet louder than ever.
An unheard melody drifting from afar.
A Symphony of Scars.
-Asher Graves
The original idea was to let the scars themselves speak—each telling its own story. But as I tried to write it, the image shifted. Instead of focusing on different scars, I began to see them as parts of the self: the body, the mind, and the spirit. Each one, in its own way, carries its scars—visible or not. So I personified them, hoping they would speak through the poem as symbols of the pain we carry, the resilience we build, and the truths we struggle to reconcile.
I don’t know if I fully did them justice.
I wonder—does the poem hold up?
Did I put enough of myself in it?
Did I earn the title, A Symphony of Scars?
