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nivek
Poems
Nov 2014
feeble
standing on a sand castle
the water ran fast as a train
wind blew all before its mighty
mighty right of passage
as all the sand grains
flew to their resting place
the castle whipped up
whipped up into the air
our feeble effort in vain
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