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Oct 2014
Jack and Jill went up
The hill because
Jill
Wanted to drink
Jacks
Blood like water.
Jack
Fell
Down,
Jill smashed his skull in
With a empty bucket
For collecting water.
Jack
Never will he be found as Jill
Thirsted
Consumed
Inhaled
The smell ofΒ Β his blood,
Before she did throw him
Down the well to hide her hunger.
Jill
Murdered the
Old Dame,
Saying she was doing this for
Attention,
Craving,
To
Be
Remembered,
Then wore her skin running
Up and down the street with madding **laughter.
Didn't like how they worded or the structure so rewriting them..
Poetic T
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