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Odd Odyssey Poet
Poems
Sep 11
Counting to Six
Fire, wind, water, earth—
perhaps I’ll be
the element of surprise.
No scent of intentions;
I broke my nose, sent into
a world that watches with
wide eyes.
Premature ideas delivered
to a man’s dream;
the stillborn
still cries; echoing even
after not seeing the light.
Often my heart feels low, unruly—
recognizing no boundary,
******* the sacrifice required
To be a man.
Sometimes I am a stone,
skipping past life · · · · · ·
1, 2, 3, 4, 5...
But never six—
for by that count,
I begin to sink.
Life and its lessons still needs
to polish me, to reach my reach.
#identity
#masculinity
#struggle
#growth
#elements
#metaphor
#comingofage
#surrealimagery
#lifelessons
#unrulyheart
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Odd Odyssey Poet
26/M/Zimbabwe
(26/M/Zimbabwe)
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