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🎸 The Lighter Tracks of My Heartbreak

Acoustic soul β€” for the one who knew exactly what he did.


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πŸŽ™οΈ Spoken Word Intro (optional live version or hidden track)

> "There’s a place where I nearly let go.
You pass it every day.

And you’ll never know
how close I came to disappearing β€”
because of how lightly
you walked away."




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🎡 [Verse 1]

I was quiet when I loved you
Too soft to hold the weight
You left like it was nothing
But nothing still feels like fate

You never saw me breaking
Though I broke in subtle ways
By a road you travel daily
Where my heart once begged to stay


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🎡 [Chorus]

Still I rise, though I bent and nearly broke
Found my breath beneath the echo of your ghost
You’ll never know the line I didn’t take
But I lived β€”
Right there
On the lighter tracks of my heartbreak


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🎡 [Verse 2]

You filled her world with answers
Left mine full of β€œwhat ifs”
I kept your secrets sacred
While you buried all of this

But time has a way of healing
Even when it leaves a mark
And the place you never noticed
Still remembers in the dark


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🎡 [Chorus]

Still I rise, with the grace you never gave
Lit a fire from the silence and the shame
You won’t see the tear-stained road I didn’t take
But I lived β€”
Right there
On the lighter tracks of my heartbreak


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πŸŽ™οΈ Optional Spoken Outro (barely audible)

> β€œIf you ever feel a chill when you pass that place...
it’s just the wind
carrying the goodbye
I never got to say.”




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🎸 Guitar Style Suggestions:

Key: D minor or E minor (emotional, haunting tones)

Style: Fingerpicked acoustic with soft reverb β€” think Damien Rice, Ben Howard, The Script (acoustic versions)

Tempo: Slow, intimate (~70–80 BPM)

Chords (Verse): Em – C – G – D

Chords (Chorus): C – G – D – Em



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Morning Star
Written by
Morning Star  40/F/Uk
(40/F/Uk)   
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