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Peter Fernandez
Poems
Jul 4
Too Much?
I care so much
And I feel a hunch
That you don’t care as much
It makes me feel like I need a crutch
I care so ******* much
One might say I care “too ******* much”
But I don’t care
Finding someone like you is rare
That's what I thought
But you left me to rot
I don’t get it
Why did you throw me in this pit?
What the **** did I do to deserve this?
Why did you make my life such a twisted abyss?
I know I’m not perfect
But is this the final verdict?
Have I been sentenced to life without you?
Can I not sue?
Can I not fight this sentence?
Time is of the essence
Can you please explain
Why did you make me feel so much pain?
How did I **** it up?
Why’d you slam the door?
I must’ve ****** it up
That's why you leave me on ignored
Can you please come back,
And not attack?
I sound like a crazy ex
Which of us makes this feel so complex?
It's just a simple misunderstanding
Why does it feel so reprimanding?
Why did you target me,
Not the other three?
What did I do to deserve this ****?
Did it have to end with this split?
Can I at least get an apology
You broke my heart that's basic biology
If anyone's guilty it's you
Not me and the crew
Don’t make it seem like its my fault
Stop it with the salt
It's like you’re rubbing it on my wounds
Don’t feed me to the hounds
Can I just get that
Just a simple chat
Where you confess
To starting this mess
To dragging it out of proportion
To causing this distortion
Written by
Peter Fernandez
15/M/Florida
(15/M/Florida)
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