When we share hope our bond is real And when our voices chant a blended song, Our ties are strong as tempered steel.
In anxious times with fears surreal, We seek out friends among the throng. Without shared hope no bond is real.
But when our wills compel us feel Spirit-bound to search, however long For ties as strong as tempered steel,
Without a sign, the fates reveal A newfound friend who's come along To share our hope; our bond is real!
With zest our common course we seal Hope-called by duty’s Siren song Our ties are strong as tempered steel,
With light and reason to fire our zeal, We rise to challenge fortune’s wrong. When we share hope our bond is real; Our ties are strong as tempered steel.
In this version of Bonds of Hope, the lines that would be identical in a classic villanelle are sometimes varied. I would be interested in knowing which version you think works better.