that left a nasty stain on the carpet...on the wall
her heart was a tiny torn pink knapsack
that held all she had known
her heart was the forgotten iron
branding itself into her nice new blouse
her heart was a field of poppies seen
from a passing train there&gone again
her heart full of the perfume
of memories that refused to ever
...go away
her heart was the same train
journey in and out of ...love.
Ha ha we were giving 5 minutes to write the poem with ad hoc imagery so off went the mind at breakneck speed borrowing bric-a-brac imagery from what was at hand.. Memory is seen( and felt )as a perfume...in its there and not-thereness whereas the poppies are a splash of red glimpsed from a passing train.as she is overwhelmed by her senses falling falling...in and out of love. It's a bit of an emotional rollercoaster ride with what her heart was experiencing as she tried to put into words feelings that could not be...put into words.
The poem issues forth from Rimbaud's commands to the energy of the time...." Le Poète vous dit: 'O lâches. soyez fous!' " to " Le Poète te dit: 'Splendide ta Beauté' " The Poet says to you: "O cowards, be mad!" to The Poet says to you; "Your beauty is marvellous!"