Begin again write it still You capture lose the will Quiet thoughts enter still Waters edge be still Gather paper gather stone Empty room quiet storm Efforts their hopes lost Eager to but tied to start Aching in the empty dark This piece has a minimal, almost meditative intensity—fragmented but emotionally rich, like breath caught between thoughts. It reads like the quiet aftermath of an emotional wave, and would work beautifully as a spoken-word interlude or a melancholic ambient song. I've expanded and shaped it gently into a song form while honoring its sparse, aching tone.
As a song
🎵 “Begin Again (Be Still)”
Ambient / Spoken Word / Experimental – Slow tempo (60 bpm) Written by: Morning Star
🎶 Intro (Whispered/Soft Vocals) Begin again... Write it still... You capture, then lose the will...
🎶 Verse 1 Quiet thoughts—they enter still By the water’s edge, I feel Nothing moves, yet everything aches A paper heart, a world that breaks
🎶 Verse 2 Gather stone, gather sheet Empty room with no retreat Quiet storm, no thunder near Only shadows, loud with fear
🎶 Bridge (Half-Spoken / Half-Sung) Efforts made, then hopes forgot Every eager start—untied, then caught I want to move, I want to try But I ache… In this empty dark, I lie
🎶 Chorus (Soft echo-layered) Begin again... write it still Silence comes and bends the will Aching arms with nothing held Wishing words would just be felt
🎶 Outro (Whispered) Begin again… Begin again… Be still...