There was a girl Who was always great fun She loved to run around In the big, bright, sun Even though she was bullied For being lovable & fun She still loved to run And always glowed like the sun Until what somebody had said Finally came through to her She then became broken And it all became a blur But after all that happened She had finally been woken From her terrible dreams Called reality Oh, how reality is cruelโฆ Oh, how reality is cruel...
I came up with this and was hoping I could have some points of improvement