This got a "Yuck and not very good" from  a certain someone ...so I'm very grateful. It wasn't meant to be a "nice" poem though I did want it to be good! My lovely friend fell in love with an absolutely terrible person who we all implored her to leave but all he had to do was to give her a bunch of flowers or a box of chocs and aghhhhh he was back. We were looking at a documentary on the finding of the actual city of Troy back in the day so I guess that imagery entered into what she was telling me and so the poem came into being!