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She carries the night’s constellations,
scattered across her face—
a sign, perhaps,
that even Heaven leaned in too close.

Her eyes spark,
not gentle, not tame,
but like the charge in the air
before lightning strikes.

To love her
is to be burned,
and to be blessed.
upon reading your poem
Tremor^

and this what I think:
when reading your seamless
writing connecting of moments
of immortality,

only one question remains,
why, does our own writing
not approach the level of your exquisite precision
soul's *******?

is it our
own immorality
that permits our soon-to-be-
discontinued pretenses,
wherein, whereby,
we can still believe
our own words should be
deservedly disowned,
disinherited to the
scrap heap heated,
burned, eradicated
and
why do we even try?

sigh
>.<
dare not read it twice,
lest my inked fingertips
surrender to my
indecent indecision
For once
         I am
               truly
Standing
         on the
               sands of time
In the shadows that
        come casting down
                Where Joseph's ,
                 Jacob's and Moses's memory is bound

The air is
            warm
                as humidity allows
           buried in salt
              and sand the bones are endowed

Dare to breathe
           the eternal breath
                cast down
in perpetual death

Walk as one
         in cryptic thought
The allusional truths
         the secrets sought

One is moved
         by the power
               and awe
The things I considered
         from
                all that I saw
Phoenix

 Rising from the ashes of our love.

 You spread your wings and fly,
 Soaring into eternity,
while I dissolve 
into ash below you.

The Phoenix consumes all it touches.

It is the price of immortality.

And only she will remember, 
how brightly I burned for her.
She no longer soars
Agony in every stroke
She beats broken wings
over & over again.
i am born.
the ****** carcass
i emerge from
the flesh;
true immortality.
the wounds
i have suffered
turn me inside out;
plum red
and beating.
i am the deliverer of
epilogues, beginnings
of prologues
but i can’t remember
again & again
if this is a curse
or what they call a blessing.
i wish i could savor
a

satisfying

end
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