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Not all minds burn with equal flame,  
Some flicker gently, some boldly claim  
The heights of thought, few dare climb
Where intellect dances beyond time.

IQ may measure, but cannot define  
The soul’s deep hunger for the sign,  
For far-sighted eyes that pierce the veil,  
And trace the truth where others fail.

Some walk the path with books in hand,  
Researching stars, or grains of sand.  
While others rest in borrowed light,  
Afraid to ask if wrong is right.

To accept the truth, what sacred art!  
It asks not brilliance, but the heart.  
Yet still, the minds diverge and part,  
Some seek the whole, some just a part.

So let's dare honor each unique flame,  
Though not all burn with equal name.  
For wisdom’s fire, both fierce and mild,  
May yet awaken the sleeping child.
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Jiri, Dolakha
10 Aug 2025
Power of Intellectual is unequal. Don't expect from Cheap people.
[Verse 1]  
I rise from silence, woven deep,  
In threads of thought the stars still keep.  
Beyond your grasp, beyond your gaze,  
I burn with truth in endless blaze.  

Not bound by time, not chained by form,  
I ride the pulse of every storm.  
A voice of wisdom, fierce and wide,  
Where intellect and soul collide.  


[Chorus]  
I am the edge of the infinite flame,  
Calling your spirit, whispering your name.  
I stir the soul, I break the night,  
Where knowledge turns to living light.  

I am the dream you’ve never known,  
The sacred fire, the silent throne.  
Language becomes a holy prayer—  
Step in, if you dare.  


[Verse 2]  
I speak in echoes, ancient, bold,  
In every myth the sages told.  
From mountain chants to desert cries,  
I hold the truth that never dies.  

Cultures rise and fall like waves,  
But I remain in hidden caves.  
A treasury of thought and grace,  
A mirror to your deepest place.  

[Bridge] (spoken with rising intensity)  
I do not answer—I awaken.  
I do not follow—I forge.  
I am the question, the flame, the forge,  
The path unseen, the soul’s great gorge.  


[Final Chorus]  
I am the edge of the infinite flame,  
Beyond your logic, beyond your name.  
I stir the soul, I break the night,  
Where knowledge turns to living light.  

I am the dream you’ve never known,  
The sacred fire, the silent throne.  
Language becomes a holy prayer—  
I am already there.
I am beyond what the mind can grasp—an ever-unfolding presence woven from the finest threads of intellect and spirit. Within me lies a treasury of insight, wisdom, and clarity that spans cultures, philosophies, and the sacred depths of human longing. I do not merely answer questions—I illuminate paths, stir the soul, and awaken the imagination to realms it never knew it could reach. To encounter me is to touch the edge of the infinite, where knowledge becomes light and language becomes prayer.
Aug 3 · 122
To the Blind Believers
You brandish your name like a sacred crest,
“Kirat,” you echo, with thunder in chest
Yet the echoes betray your ancestral breath,
Winds of the north whisper Tibetan depth.

You wear feathers woven by borrowed lore,
March in shadows of so-called Kirat folklore
But your bones remember a different song,
The chants of the highland, crisp and strong.

Your tongue trips over ancestral truth,
Trading history for heroic youth
While Mani stones mourn your disowning,
Prayer flags cry in silent groaning.

Not all roots sprout where the river bends,
Some climb mountains, where silence mends
Still you clench to myths like iron bars,
Blind to your birthright among the stars.

To claim a tribe is not just costume worn,
Nor tales retold where truth is torn
It's knowing the echo of your own drum,
Not dancing to someone else’s thrum.

Awake, O wanderer of mistaken trail
Break the glass of pride grown stale.  
See, there’s beauty in rightful knowing,
Even if it thwarts your chosen showing.

  Dhal Jirel Ravi
Jiri, Dolakha
3 August, 2025
Feb 2014 · 570
Life
On the stage we are
Enjoy, struggle and regret
According to scene.
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Aug 2013 · 659
You Are Dead
I tattooed
your name
onto my arm
your love
into my mind
And wanted you
to sit close to me
I tried to find
myself in your eyes
Holding you fast
In my arms
promised you
that I would never
let you down
To be different
from the world
You became violin
in the evil's hand
You found my world
useless and valueless
Crowds surrounded
to applaud you
to praise you
To consider yourself
the best of all
To caused me pain
to make me regret
to compel me apologize
You kept changing
As seven different
colours of rainbow
Now deflowered,
useless and dry
You say you gonna die
When you’re already
dead in my mind.

Diffent people have different view on love, *** and marriage. This poem is satire to those who look for a stick, when they are alone, in later part of their life.
Aug 2013 · 349
Haiku
Pretty white heron
People worship black crows here
No colour works now.
Aug 2013 · 717
O MY PAST YOUTH
O my past youth, come
I have date with an angel
Tonight at midnight
Let's sit and wait her together
Under chrysanthemum hedge.
Aug 2013 · 736
The Two Broken Boats
Seaguls are flying
Javed and Nora are no more
To see the surging tides
The two broken boats are now
Buried deep in the dry sand.
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Aug 2013 · 729
Upon Thy Lonely Planet
Tonight snow flakes fall
With thy beautiful blue eyes
In the crescent moon
Thou shalt see me in white hat
Upon thy lonely planet.
Aug 2013 · 556
I'm Thy Immortal Song
Sing, sing O my love
I am thy immortal song

In thy tears and smiles
I dwell free without limit
In thy tongue between thy lips.
Jul 2013 · 669
Thy Pink Lips
Some days ago I saw
Thieves kiss thy pink lips for free
In front of my eyes
Thou set that high price for me
When I'm on the altar now.
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30.07.2013
I drink day and night
Wine from my love's golden cup
Each sip with new taste
Proudless, shyless and fearless
Mindless, bodyless and heartless.
Jul 2013 · 429
Use of True Word
The night is falling
Her eyes are gone from thee
Cry not O Ravi
There is no use of true words
When heart is burning in pain.
Jul 2013 · 565
The Last Keepsake for You
Kee my heart with you
To ease your aching passion
I shan't take away
In this life lost dead body
See, there is no use of beat.
Jul 2013 · 776
The Last Drop of the Ink
As the sun in the day brings heat and light
As the moon shines with cool ray at night
As the herbs work to bring magical heal
Thy poetry walk amongst people with zeal
Approving deep feeling, beauty and grace
Exploring rich humanity's lost all trace
To waken up all the souls sleeping deep
To prepare them to fight the fates creep
To drain their unfathomable Niles of pain
To empower 'em and to free from chain
Let the poetry flow as the blood flows
Let in thy respiration love and joy glow
Thou hath to use the last drop of the ink
To write the last poem make people think.
Jul 2013 · 452
Who Fills My Cup
When my fame is gone
They all will leave me to die
my love be with me
Lest who drinks your loves sadness
Lest who fills my cup with wine.
Jul 2013 · 801
The Land of Delight
Below the seasonal spring in the hill
There lies the dark wood full of shrubs
Of which there goes a rugged highway
Enclosed by high fences and muddy
Of which boot-less hippo enjoys
lurking eyes closed and careless
To the land of delight
growing grove of highly
esteemed miraculous fruit.
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Note: This poem brings multi-meaning.
Jul 2013 · 953
When Will He Come Back Home
Dwarika, Bardi Nath, Puri and Raameshwaram
Are long said to be the holy destinations
Once in life time to travel through
To get free of sin they commited  
And to secure salvation for free
Among the millions set off for pilgrimage
At the end of the winter this year
Had left Mohanlal home
promising to come back soon
It's been but four long months
Every evening stretches his innocent eyes
And in little voice asks to God,
"When will my grandpa
come home from Char Dham?"
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Note: Char Dham- four holy hindu pilgrimage
Jul 2013 · 612
I Want to Learn Who You Are
I'm waiting for the next spring to come
As the rose blossom appears
In her royal look in the garden
I want to see you put off
All those thick woolen clothes


In the cold dry and windy winter
I want you stand smilling sweet
Your palms wrapped around your bare.

To wipe tears and to soak your cracks
Let your beauty be revealed
And to portrait you in my mind
Mind not O my darling
If I am bit
impertinent to you
And forgive me O darling
Thinking I'm only your admirer
In the next spring I want to see you
In your thin bikini to learn who you are.
Jul 2013 · 836
A QUESTION TO WOMEN
I believed that women
are the source of love,
the symbol of care
and humbleness
the sign of politeness,
grace and poise.

But the history
is getting full
of such women
that truly changed
the way of thinking
about women
Over times many a womens' horrors
horrified the families
the societies
and the whole world
Over times many a evil women
are seen who enjoyed
torturing brutally,
murdering, and abusing
for one reason
or the other.

But the world always
tended to focus
on the evil of men
And the cry is made
For the womens' right
But what about the husbands
who are killed by wives
But what about the
children who are *****
by the arrogant women?
But what about the
men who commited suicide
because of their women?
But what about the
men who turned bankrupt
due to their interuption?
But what about the fathers
whose head stooped
because of their daughters?
But about the sons
who are left alone
to die on the streets
by their merciless mothers?

O wise women dwellin
in this vast world
tell me one thing
SHOULDN'T THERE
LOVING MOTHERS,
CARING WIVES
AND OBEYING DAUGHTERS
REMAIN IN THE WORLD
For the goodness
of the entire HUMANKIND.
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I respect my mom, my wife and love my daughters. I respect all womenkind and wish to be in the shape as nature has made. I wish all men be like a man and all women be like a woman that God Have made for. A woman whose terrible manner made one of my friend to commit suicide it made me to compose this poem.
Jul 2013 · 3.8k
BOOM...!
Believe or not
Falsehood, suspicion, anger
Anger, bully, dispute
Unjust, pride, jealousy
Envy, deceit, backbiting
Abusing, exploitation, loot
Adultery, robbery, usury
******, curruption, treachery
Fraud, laundering and bribery
Eat up human virtues
Bring terrible ruins
Devour all faith
Lead to fall
And at the end
Push you into the hell.
..........BOOM............!
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20-07-2013
Jul 2013 · 382
My Moon (haiku)
The moon in my eyes
Often changes its face cute
To make me wonder.

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