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  Oct 2016 Dmytro from Trotskiev
Pax
I wrote a poem
hoping to give
it to you, will you
even read it?

I wrote it with an aching
heart, will you
ever read it?

The poem I wrote
was given a melody,
will you, will you
even hear it?

I am not a singer
nor a great writer
but will you
even hear my
heart?

will you?


© Pax
raw, i wrote this while listening to "Sia's Soon We'll Be Found"
Train is coming to the city of steal,
And you are aboard granting the dream.
As you enter the city of knowledge,
A science miracle on the lake's edge.

Two hours ago, you followed a river down stream,
Just then you saw a sky high  tower covered in steam .
The tower of Lesia, or so the folks call it,
The greatest library on Earth is within it.

The city's houses are created of steel,
Forever they move, afraid to stay still.
Universities are all over the place,
So that everyone can science embrace.

And mechanical creatures wonder it's streets,
It seems like they are alive, as you hear their heartbeats.
The folk in here works miracles every day,
Each district's so different in it's own way.

The streets are in fog but one thing is clear,
Now  there is no doubt that magic is real.
The city's walls With gears are covered ,
Cause all of the city is a steam powered
Huger then lake machine   .
If this poem is no good, please tell me, what's wrong, so I can improve my skills. I would really appreciate if you do.
Fall is here, oh, what a beauty,
"Raid for knowledge"-calls our duty.
So grace has come to my mind,
welcoming fall, it's door's open wide
The floor is touched with leaves deep gold;
sooner or later all trees shall be bold.
sun will no longer burn me to death,
from now on it's clowdy, so I've got my breath.
Come on, let's live on with the bravest smile
cause now we're alive, once in such a long while.
For winter so much I wait
Siting each day by the gate.
With each moment it's getting colder
And night's growing all so much longer.

A cold lovely rain comes
Happens it every now and then
Shortly in snow it transforms
Now, the only question is "when?"

And I'm avare of it, and  I'm so glad
Therefore I just cannot fill bad
Waiting for winter, my queen to come
In my happiness I'm second to none
Don't you lie
Cause you're a liar so poor
Don't you stay double-edged
Now,I'll know the truth  anyway
The one that your eyes give away
Don't you call my name
Know, that I am gone for good
Don't  you
I'm so tried of promises never granted
And words forever and ever forgotten
Therefore  forget me once and for all
I'm in pain, figures you've reached your goal
The palace of dreams,
there is a garden full of streams.
Where you can hear songs 'bout liberty
And poets speak of infinity.
In deeper rooms you will find secret galleries
And hallways are filled with novels and diaries .
And there we all, artists, live, as it's our kingdom
We all, courageous dreamers, our works about freedom.
So come to us with not a single regret, overground.
Let your talent shine really bright, with us, mates, all around.
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