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 Nov 2018 ArielMarriel
Hanaa
How can emptiness be so heavy?
When the days grow colder
And I'm covered over
By snow and icy sleets
I'll find the comfort I'd found in you
In pen on empty sheets
I don't need you anymore
 Nov 2018 ArielMarriel
Simplified
Draw it they said, let it all out.
So I gave that a go and I drew what I felt.

But they didn't see.

Sing it they said, make it a song.
So I sang them a tune to describe what was wrong.

But they didn't hear.

Say it they said, make it a play.
but when I tried that they just looked away.

They weren't watching.

Write it they said, share us your story.
So I wrote them a novel that didn't have glory.

But they didn't read it.

Why are you sad? Are you in pain?
They ask me again as I struggle in vain.

Am I really here?
All the suggestions on how to help....
 Nov 2018 ArielMarriel
JDL
You must do it the right way
YOUR way is the only write way

They say nothing rhymes with orange
Well I am here to encourage

Yeah, go ahead and laugh at it
You don’t even know the half of it

Our poetry is for us, ourselves
Whether you’re ninety nine, or twelve

We commune within our souls
Another etch upon our scrolls

Our soul inverted, exposed
Something only we compose

Don’t ever be discouraged
Your writing is encouraged!
HePo seems to be a very positive place for poets, but for those of you who have dealt with negativity about your poems, this is for you.

Also, for you critics out there, this is only my second “rap” poem so be nice plz. ;)
Positives feedback is of course always encouraged. :)
"I just want everyone to leave me alone!"


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".....I'm so lonely....."
Written: October 21, 2018

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 Nov 2018 ArielMarriel
Shewrites
Wish you were here with me
Gazing upon the city lights
under the starry sky
We'll hang a lovelock
in the bridge
with our names
engraved on it.
Today was cold
Because of Autumn's breeze
Wrap me around
Your cozy arms
And make me warm
I miss your touch.
I miss you
And ill see you soon my love!


Lots of love
Shekinah
 Nov 2018 ArielMarriel
Georgia
Screaming sounds like melodies
Darkness feels like home
Existing is endless
And tormenting me

Black and blue bruises litter my soul
Trying to find a home in the dark
Where my senses aren't
Completely falling apart
Trying to find somewhere
Your plague hasn't touched
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